Sunday, November 7, 2010

Six Sentence Sunday 11-07-10

         A few weeks ago, I offered a glimpse from Aidon's POV.  Here's Stephanie's. From my currently-being-revised WIP, Pomegranate Seeds.


          This guy puts his brothers--none of them slouches in the hot hunk department--in the shade. Even unconscious, his power beams off him with the force of a gazillion giga-watts, like the energy generated by an exploding sun. My fingers itch to stroke through this unbelievable stud muffin's thatch of midnight hair, to rip the linen shirt off his thick, muscular shoulders and wander across his toned six-pack--despite the broken arrow shaft jutting from his chest.
         He murmurs something in a voice that throbs through me, ramping up my excitement, his hard, sensual mouth curving in a smile so sexy I wonder if my knees will actually buckle, if I'll actually fall on top of him. I know he's doped up with lust-poison but the idea of us tangled together in an ecstatic fever of sweaty limbs makes my pulse speed up as if I'm the one who took Coop's arrow in the heart.
        I am such a goner.



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35 comments:

Jayel Kaye said...

another winner! lust poison, gimme some!

Jessica Subject said...

She's got it bad. I don't think he'll have a problem wearing off his lust-poison with her.

heatherthurmeier said...

I think that sounds like a pretty great poison to suffer the effects of! I'm sure they can find some way to work the poison out of his body!!

Lisa Fox said...

Stud muffin - I love it! With that description, I would have it bad for him too I think.

Taryn Kincaid said...

You should see him when he's conscious!

graylinfox said...

I'm a goner too. Where can I get me one of those? ;)

Taryn Kincaid said...

Ihope, eventually, at a bookseller near you!

Eleri Stone said...

Lust-poison!!!! I love it. Even unconscious and shot, he's working his magic.

Stacey Kennedy said...

Very sexy scene!! Stud muffin...giggles...I love that!!

Taryn Kincaid said...

You have to understand that this is the Lord of the Underworld. And there isn't another person on this planet or any other that would dare refer to him as a "stud muffin." But Stef isn't exactly Ms. Reverence 2050!

Sandra Sookoo said...

but what a way to go...

Taryn Kincaid said...

You won't hear Stef complaining!

Marsha A. Moore said...

Think I'd willingly take that lust-poisoned arrow!

Taryn Kincaid said...

Be careful what you wish for! LOL!

Jaime Samms said...

You always have to be careful of those arrow shot hotties!

The Book Blogger said...

Lust-Poisen eh? That sounds like some fun!

Huh hem, the recipe please!

Great sixsentence as always.. xx
Kerrianne

Taryn Kincaid said...

You have to be careful of this guy arrow-shot or not arrow-shot! Thanks for coming by Jaime! Welcome to Six Sunday!

Taryn Kincaid said...

Kerrianne!

Yay! You made it! Hope to be seeing yours soon!

laynap said...

Lust poison - muwahahah love it! Can't wait to see more from this wip.

Jennifer Probst said...

Love it, love it, love it. This MUST be published!

Taryn Kincaid said...

Thanks, Layna!

Taryn Kincaid said...

Jen -- From your typing fingers to the Publishing Gods' ears! Make that eyes!

Emily Cale said...

Love it!

Taryn Kincaid said...

Thanks, Emily!

Christa Paige said...

Where can I get some of that lust poison? Go right ahead and rip that shirt off, I want to see more!

Taryn Kincaid said...

I want to see more, too! (Well, a synopsis, anyway. LOL!)

Thanks, Christa!

Dee Carney said...

Girl, you and me both are goners. LOL

Lex Valentine said...

Rawr! Stud muffin indeed!

Taryn Kincaid said...

Dee: I love all my heros, of course, but I really love Aidon!

Taryn Kincaid said...

Lex~

Wow! A growl! LOVE it!

Alanna Coca said...

Yay for long sentences! :)

Taryn Kincaid said...

Yeah, I get creative with Six Sunday sometimes. Smush a few together on occasion. But you guessed that already, right?
(winky)

Shoshanna Evers said...

Great sentences :)

Hailey Edwards said...

Smokin' excerpt. ;)

Taryn Kincaid said...

Thanks, peeps.

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