Sunday, December 5, 2010

Six Sentence Sunday 12-05-2010

This week, a little Six Sentence snippet from my WIP, Cole in Her Stocking. 


      Cole’s mouth crushed hers, his potent kiss delivering a burst of electric fire that sizzled through her, melting her completely. He tilted her head and angled his mouth,  hard and slashing, his tongue tracing the outline of her lips. He tasted like the coffee he’d swilled on the two-hour drive from the city, but hotter and more exciting--a double shot of pure caffeine spiked with single malt Irish whisky.
 
      Her thirst for him ratcheted out of control and she could not drink enough, her hands traveling from his hair to his shoulders, her fingers digging into thick muscle.

     “Holy cow, Brannigan,” she murmured, her lips vibrating against his.

     “I know,” he said. “Shut up.”





My free Christmas read, I'll Be Home for Christmas, is up for anyone looking for something a little more warm and fuzzy. 
 


32 comments:

Jessica Subject said...

Oh, I like Cole, especially his "thick muscle"

heatherthurmeier said...

I like Cole. He's so hot and good and hot. Did I mention hot?

Liz said...

I love this story.

and of course love his response at the end there

Eleri Stone said...

A double shot of caffeine and single malt Irish whisky - he sounds yummy.

Taryn Kincaid said...

Oh, I love waking up to comments! Thanks, kids. I love Cole, too. Ah, that wasn't his only response at the end there. But...you know. Six. Ish.

Sarah Grimm said...

Great snippet. Cole sounds like the kind of man I'd like to have in my stocking. LOL

graylinfox said...

Whiskey flavored hotness!

Kerrianne Coombes said...

HOLY COW, indeed!
Hot!

Lisa Fox said...

Hot damn, now that's a kiss! And I LOVE that title.

Taryn Kincaid said...

Well, he's been working undercover as a bartender. He knows whiskey. (Also beer...but Lara doesn't know that yet.) Yeah. He's a pretty good kisser, right?

Liia Ann White said...

Hot freaking damn! You've outdone yourself! I love it :)

Taryn Kincaid said...

This is their first kiss, by the way.
In a place they shouldn't be. After about a month of approach-avoidance.

Jayel Kaye said...

Oh I like Cole, Shut up and kiss some more!

Rebecca Royce said...

Shut up? I love it!!

laynap said...

Damn that was hot! Why did you have to stop there????

Great post Taryn!

Taryn Kincaid said...

Thanks, ladies.

(I've stopped there. Cole, um, doesn't. But he does manage to shut Lara up. At least momentarily!

Pippa Jay said...

Hmm, now I want coffee. :)

Marie Dees said...

Yum, hot coffee and a hot man!

Jaime Samms said...

heh, heh. That last line. Golden. I love it.

Eve Cassidy said...

Great snippet and I really like the title!

Shoshanna Evers said...

Gotta love an alpha male :)

Christa Paige said...

Oh boy, yes! Love it when the hero tells her 'shut up' so he can continue with his hawtness. Thinking about spiking my own coffee, now, just for a taste.

Taryn Kincaid said...

Thanks, everyone. Appreciate you stopping by!

Leanne Dyck said...

Shut up? Oh, I hope she teaches him some manners. : )

jacquezyon said...

Great excerpt...I love the description of the kiss! And the line "I know...shut up." Nice!

Emily Cale said...

Holy- Love it so much. Love caffeine, love hot men.

alanna coca said...

Love it. "Shut up" :)

Sandra Sookoo said...

Nice and I love the title!

Hailey Edwards said...

Great snippet! :D

Taryn Kincaid said...

Thanks!

Stacey Kennedy said...

Awesome!!! Loved it!!!

jenniferprobst said...

You are so good at love scenes - I just love this couple. Love the new blog! Where I have been? In holiday chaos and kid hell? Nice and clean and bright.

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