Mia bristled like a sea urchin, her acquamarine eyes alight. "That's because you're a frickin'...giant."
Pierce decided he liked flirting with the odd girl positioned behind the Spa Bay reception counter more than anything he'd done in a long time. She didn't seem cowed that he was a Cronoson, Lord of the Deep; she dealt with him not as a god but as a man.
"So I can call you...'Moondoggie' then?" she asked, glancing back at the computer screen again.
"You can if I'm your boyfriend, Gidge."
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38 comments:
Absolutely loved the last line! Great snippet.
Last line is a great hook. Love it!
I love their interactions, and things are about to get hot, I think. A great six! :)
This is fantastic! I love their flirtation.
I hadn't thought about Gidget in years! Finally I remember the actress was Sandra Dee.
Ha! Sweet dialogue and a super six!
Bristled like a sea urchin...love the description. So appropriate for the story.
Great six, love their flirting.
Moondoggie, eh? This has got to be the funniest thing I've read so far this morning. :-)
Great flirtation between these two! Can't wait for this one to be complete so I can read it as a whole book instead just snippets.
Wow that brings me back - good for computers or she never would have found the good come back - though his was better - fun stuff
Aw, I like his reply. :)
I'm really enjoying the relationship that's going on here - fun! Terrific excerpt as always.
Tee hee! The flirting between them is so cute! I love the boyfriend line.
He's officially adorable. Love his character. :)
Great chemistry between them. Love her fire and love even more that he appreciates it.
There' something so incredibly sweet about this pair :)
Cute banter!
Really a charming exchange. I definitely want more of that. Great 6!
Nice little bit of flirting between them. That last line gives a nice hint of interest on his part.
Very cute exchange, Taryn. Love it.
Cute six! Nice characterization of the hero.
"bristled like a sea urchin"... loved that.
Oh, that's so cute! And sexy. Loved it.
Yea! I heart Surfer Dude! And I think he may have met his match. :)
You know I do like Surfer Dude.
Love their playful banter. Glad to see Surfer Dude's back. :)
Moondoggie and Gidget! Ha! They were reruns when I was growing up, but jeez you've brought back some memories. lol
Wow. Direct, isn't he? I think she'll turn him down (at first)? Fun six-made me chuckle.
Awww. Love this. Very cute! Fun!
I really enjoyed this! Oh, how I love the Gidget films! (Moondoggie was also quite 'dreamy'). :) This was a great snippet!
Oh, I like this! Great six.
This was a very fun six. I needed the chuckle :) Thanks for sharing!
I'll have you know, I spit out wine over my keyboard over the 'moondoggie'comment. LOL
What a fun and sassy 6!
LOL! What a fun six!
Love the humour inthis snippet.
That's awesome. Mia's so sassy! And Surfer Dude...well...*sigh*
LOL Moondoggie indeed. I've really enjoyed the way you incorporate the sea into all aspects of this WIP. :)
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