Sunday, July 22, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday: 7-22-12

Here are the first six from my sexy new paranormal short, THUNDER, just submitted yesterday. Fingers crossed! (Sean's the brother of the hero in LIGHTNING, coming soon from Decadent Publishing's 1Night Stand series.)

            “How’d you get this number, princess?” Sean Jones growled into his iPhone.

            The naked supermodel lying next to him in bed murmured her annoyance and rolled over, presenting him with her back.

            The woman on the other end of his private line was going to be the frickin’ death of him.  Literally, figuratively, every which way there was.

            “I advised your office I had an emergency,” the plummy, aristocratic voice of Veronica Hardwicke crooned into his ear. “I need you out here at once, Mr. Jones.”

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18 comments:

Alexa said...

Interesting six! :-)

Jessica E. Subject said...

Oh, so much revealed in this six, and yet, I want more. :)

Donna Cummings said...

This sounds fun! I love his opening line, and I love how she's going to be the death of him. LOL Great six.

Robin Leigh Morgan said...

How is he going to handle two envious women at the same time if they should ever meet? :-)

Veronica Scott said...

So much revealed in those six sentences, but so many questions raised at the same time LOL! I definitely want to read MORE - terrific snippet!

Linda Morris said...

I love the description of her voice as "plummy." Something tells me that the model won't be in his bed that much longer! Great six.

Unknown said...

Hmm, seems he has a little woman trouble. Can't wait to read more and find out what so important that she needs he right away.

Great six!
Michelle
www.michelle-pickett.com/blog

Zee Monodee said...

Sounds like sparks are about to fly! Good six :)

Ann Swann said...

Ooh, I love it when a man meets his match. Great Six!

christine warner said...

hmmm...very interesting six...lots of possibilities where this could be going and there is nothing better than a man having women issues. lol

sue said...

Love her name!

Paula Martin said...

Intriguing six, am wondering what the 'emergency' is!

Monica Enderle Pierce said...

You know, I'm not convinced Mr. Jones has anything to complain about. LOL!

Maryellen said...

ooo I can tell these two are going to set some sparks off :)

diannehartsock said...

Mr. Jones sounds like he's in for a little trouble with that one. Wonderful! :)

Lisa Fox said...

Yay! How exciting. My fingers are totally crossed!

Patricia Preston said...

Good luck! This guy sounds like he's got his hands full!

Anonymous said...

Best of luck! I wanna know more about Veronica Hardwicke... (though the naked girl sounds interesting too. ;) )

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