Sunday, August 5, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday 8-5-12

Just realized how difficult it's going to be plucking G-rated "sixes" from THUNDER, currently out on submission! Aside from the hot scenes, the hero's tendency to sprinkle F-bombs like croutons may be a bit of a problem.

Language, Sean. Or mama may have to wash your mouth out with soap!
                                    
                Her breathy purr did bad, bad things to him.
            Hell. The entire Veronica package did bad, bad things to him. No denying the woman was one smokin’ hot babe. A loony babe. But a damn fine babe nonetheless.  

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13 comments:

Alexa said...

LOVE it! Good luck with it getting picked up, but I have a feeling getting a contract won't be a problem!

bw said...

Loved your six sentence sunday. Check out mines. :)
http://www.soniawrites.com/2012/08/six-sentence-sunday-his-backward-ways.html

Lisa Fox said...

He has quite an opinion of her!

sue said...

is loony a bad thing?

Linda Morris said...

Since when did a guy ever mind hot but loony, lol? Great six, and good luck with the submission!

Monica Enderle Pierce said...

I gotta agree with Linda, most men don't care, which makes it all the more interesting that he does.

Paula Martin said...

LOL, who cares about loony when she's hot!

Dee Carney said...

LOL. Very cute!

christine warner said...

LOL...this sounds like it'll be a fun read!

Good luck with submissions!

Eleri Stone said...

Why stick with G-rated? Love your sense of humor:)

diannehartsock said...

A loony babe? This sounds fun!

Amy Gregory said...

Ah, I love that you prefaced your snippet with that comment! Just makes me want to read it even more now! Love the six :)
Hugs,
A

Veronica Scott said...

OK LOL any heroine named Veronica is ok in my book! The fact that she's "loony" just adds spice, right? Great excerpt, loved the purr.

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