Language, Sean. Or mama may have to wash your mouth out with soap!
Her breathy purr did bad, bad things to him.
Hell. The entire Veronica package did bad, bad things to him. No denying the woman was one smokin’ hot babe. A loony babe. But a damn fine babe nonetheless.
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13 comments:
LOVE it! Good luck with it getting picked up, but I have a feeling getting a contract won't be a problem!
Loved your six sentence sunday. Check out mines. :)
http://www.soniawrites.com/2012/08/six-sentence-sunday-his-backward-ways.html
He has quite an opinion of her!
is loony a bad thing?
Since when did a guy ever mind hot but loony, lol? Great six, and good luck with the submission!
I gotta agree with Linda, most men don't care, which makes it all the more interesting that he does.
LOL, who cares about loony when she's hot!
LOL. Very cute!
LOL...this sounds like it'll be a fun read!
Good luck with submissions!
Why stick with G-rated? Love your sense of humor:)
A loony babe? This sounds fun!
Ah, I love that you prefaced your snippet with that comment! Just makes me want to read it even more now! Love the six :)
Hugs,
A
OK LOL any heroine named Veronica is ok in my book! The fact that she's "loony" just adds spice, right? Great excerpt, loved the purr.
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