So here's a paragraph from THUNDER, a 1Night Stand story from Decadent Publishing.
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Wednesday, January 16, 2013
Hump Day Hook!
Okay, because Six Sentence Sunday may not be quite enough...I'm trying out another snippet list. This one is called Hump Day Hook. Participants post paragraphs on Wednesdays.
The thuds from upstairs sent a shudder through her, and she glanced down at the protective circle of salt she’d cast to form an energy boundary on the buffed, patterned parquet wood floor in the master bedroom. Didn’t seem like the thing was doing much good. But who the heck knew if she’d even drawn it right. She wasn’t a very good witch.
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12 comments:
LOL I love how she is sort of 'Meh' about the witch thing. I think i have to read this book x
Nice Hook, I wonder if she'll be safe within her circle. Nice bit of humor too. Good job.
Awesome! I'm with Kerrianne! She described it perfectly. "Meh!" lol.
Love the insight into her character! Great hook! :)
This sounds like a great read. Nice hook!
Heh...an amusing little snip. I'm curious to see what she's protecting herself from...and if the circle holds.
I loved the hook...can't wait to read more!
I loved your hook. An intriguing one!
I loved your hook. An intriguing one!
I like witches who are not too sure of themselves and I want to know more about her and her world. Great hook!
Provokes intrigue, interest, and a slight pity for her, as well as hope that she will learn how to be an awesome witch! Well done
Aww...I hope she gains confidence in her witchability!
I also loved the excerpt from Frost!
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