(I thought it was pretty tame, actually, just, you know, sexy.)
So let's try a more squeaky clean excerpt on for size.
Summer
McCoy perched in the uppermost branches of her special Ponderosa pine,
in raven guise, engaging in her
favorite pastime, spying on the
lone wolf chopping wood below. Two days’ worth of
whiskers shadowed his rigid jaw. She
loved when he forgot—or didn’t bother—to shave. Scruffy stubble suited him.
The
sun beat down on the back of
his bronzed neck and shone on
his hair, the color of roasted coffee, a shade lighter than the dark shadow that charcoaled his face. She fluffed
her feathers in anticipation. Take your shirt off, Brick.
She’d heard
the giant werebear, Gee, call him that name a decade ago.
He’d made some joke about a wall and the hardness of the male’s head. But Brick
hadn’t laughed back then. Not ever.
He’d fascinated
her from the moment he’d arrived
in the glade, bruised and battered. Once she’d learned his
name, she’d treasured it, taking pleasure
from repeating it often. Secretly, of course. Unwrapping the
syllable frequently to admire its radiance in the privacy of her tree house, the way a
woman wearing pearls against her warm skin enhanced their luminosity and iridescence.
Now, as
if he’d heard her
silent urging, he complied with
her plea, shrugging out of the plaid
flannel and flinging it onto a
tree stump. Her beak
opened as she sucked
in breath. Sweat glistened on his torso, glazing rippling pecs and abs, shoulders
broad enough to span the Badlands.
A huge, incredible specimen of masculinity. Thick biceps
flexed as he wielded the
ax. Her heart beat faster than a hummingbird’s
wings. Heat licked her.
So what do you think? [wink]
1 comment:
Very nice!!! Can't wait!
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