Sunday, July 10, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday 7-10-11

     Took a little Facebook poll to see what'd end up here today and, at the time I set up this post, the Coles seemed to have it. At least on Facebook. (A couple of people told me privately or on Twitter they wanted to see a Surfer Dude snippet, which would have pushed Pierce over the top. You shouldn't have voted twice, Jo Kenrick!) And two people voted Regency, warming my heart.
     So...maybe more Surfer Dude next week, but for today it's Cole & Lara, more or less where we left them last week:

     Lara relinquished the small computer, but treated him to a view of her back. Muttering under her breath, she tossed things into an overnight bag, then paused, her head tilted to one side, her eyes narrowed as if she were considering the growing mound of clothes on the bed, unsure of what to take.

     “How long?” she demanded.

     Cole jerked his gaze away from the enticing sight of her curvy, heart-shaped ass bent over the carryall and decided she was not asking about the size of his erect cock.

     “How long what?” he grunted, more than a little stupid after all the blood had left his brain on a southbound train.

     “How long will this alleged ‘protective custody’ of yours last?”


 
(Googled "Male models with guns" and this picture popped up. Naturally, I thought it was a picture of Cole, fully armed. I now realize he's not carrying firearms at all -- it's a frickin' saddle. With stirrups. At least I think it is. Has nothing whatever to do with this snippet. But it's so tasty I'm keeping it, anyway. I'm pretty sure y'all will agree on that call.)
   

52 comments:

Alix said...

Taryn your words are so playful. I love them. Excellent six! I especially liked the line 'all the blood had left his brain on a southbound train.' Thank you very much for such an entertaining snippet.

Cara Bristol said...

Fun. fun. fun. Great humor. Love the phrase, "the blood had left his brain on a southbound train."

Anonymous said...

"Protective custody" has a place in my heart, both official and unofficial! How long, indeed. :)

~Xakara
Dawn's Early Light 6SS

Sarah Grimm said...

Fun six! Makes me glad Cole won the poll.

Anonymous said...

Ok, where do i start? First off, the six was FAB!! I loved his inner thoughts about his cock *Grins* Very good.
And the photo is just about the hottest damn thing i have ever seen! And i would take a man holding a saddle over a gun any day! PHWOR!!
My Sunday has just been made!

Jessica E. Subject said...

Love this excerpt! So much sexual tension already. Can't wait to read more! :)

Stacey Kennedy said...

HA! Such a man!! "Cole jerked his gaze away from the enticing sight of her curvy, heart-shaped ass bent over the carryall and decided she was not asking about the size of his erect cock."

Lisa Fox said...

Yay! Lara and Cole AND a great picture! I am so happy right now I could burst.

Graylin Fox said...

Lara and Cole. *sigh* And that picture? Wowza.

Liz said...

A truly LOL moment! Great six!

Sandra Sookoo said...

LOL that was a great snippet!

JoAnne Kenrick said...

Haha, oh well...looks like it turned out as it should have for the vote! This is a fab choice of snippet, very saucy and playful. How long? LMAO you crack me up, Taryn. LOVVVVEDD this snippet.

lexcade said...

It soooooooo doesn't matter LOL. That pic is teh HAWTNESS.

Love the snippet. I love your style and your voice in each piece. Cole and Lara are growing on me ;)

Cate Masters said...

Wonderful descriptions. Love this six! And yep, great call on the pic. :)

Gem Sivad said...

I hope the "protective custody" lasts a long time. I'm guessing it will. Great look at both characters in just six.

Anonymous said...

Heart shaped ass? LOL very descriptive

Laura Kaye said...

LOL on the picture description. Definitely a keeper, saddle or no! Jeebus.

Loved the excerpt, especially his internal thoughts. Great!

Jessica Knauss said...

Love the "southbound train." You are amazing that you have so many snippets to choose from!

Suzie Quint said...

Love the way you've shown what she's feeling. And the picture? Yowzer!

MJones said...

Like like like! Thanks for sharing (the photo)!!

D Carney said...

lol! Great job!

Unknown said...

Finish this. please please please. And yeah. What's with the saddle?

Monica Enderle Pierce said...

*snort* southbound train. Too funny! That woman had no idea how much trouble she's in, does she?

Janet Lane Walters said...

Nice snippet. Consider leaving the last phrase off the first sentence. The picture is hot.

Pippa Jay said...

I love how his mind completely misinterpreted her questions, lol.

Chrystalla Thoma said...

What a great picture! And a great snippet, too... :-)

Anonymous said...

That was so funny, I'm really glad you went with this one. Their chemistry is brilliant. Fab six again Taryn :)

Paula Martin said...

Love the snippet, love the photo!

Verna Clay said...

"Southbound Train" That's really funny! Enjoyed the snippet!

Angela S. Stone said...

Oh man!! sorry what was your six about??? I'm too busy staring at that "Saddle"

LOL!
Great six! and sexy picture!

xx
A.

Anonymous said...

lol, no she was NOT asking that :-D Fab snippet!

Luxie Ryder said...

Loved the humour...and I'm feeling you over that pic! Excellent choice ;)

Sondra said...

"Southbound train" had me LOL. But oh my oh my. Glad you posted the photo below your excerpt so I didn't see it until I read your 6. I would hate to have missed such a fun exchange. Your guy is a traffic stopper, even if he does have that weird unidentified object hanging off his back.

Anonymous said...

I'm with Sondra on the 'southbound train'.

Michele said...

"....blood left his brain on a south bound train.." I LOVE that!! Awesome 6 as per usual. And the photo....hell YES it's a keeper!

Bree said...

I really enjoyed this. Great snippet!

Piper said...

Delectable six. Awesome job.

Jayel Kaye said...

Southbound train. I love it!

Unknown said...

Hee hee. :) Great 6, and very descriptive.

Anonymous said...

Excellent!

Anonymous said...

Loved your post this week. I really do love these characters!

Tara Andrews said...

Love how easily distracted Cole can apparenlty get. That's going to be fun. And that picture - very hot!

Gin said...

I wouldn't mind a bit of protective custody. ::grins:: Good job.

Gin Price

Sonya said...

This snippet made me laugh. Love it.

That's a saddle in that pic? I thought maybe it was some strange bondage gear I wasn't familiar with. Whatever, he's got great abs. :)

Sandy Nachlinger said...

Great description and dialog. I can see and hear the scene perfectly.
Can't complain about the photo either. I can see why you didn't notice the saddle right away.
PS: Thanks for posting on my blog.

AllureVanSanz said...

I've said it many times before. I'm a fan. Great six.

Best,
Allure Van Sanz

Unknown said...

Loved the description of blood leaving his brain! LOL! Your vision of Cole is SUPERB!

Lucy Felthouse said...

Hehe, love this six! And as for the photo, who cares what he's holding - he's yum! :)

Alanna Coca said...

Well? How long? ;) And thanks for keeping the picture lol

Hailey Edwards said...

Ha! That bit about "how long" made me laugh out loud. Great six!

1000th.monkey said...

Love that she's still ticked off :) ...but if she stuffs her bag with clothes, what about her shoes?!?!

Taryn Kincaid said...

Funny you should ask about her shoes. Cole's about to have a run-in with them a few paragraphs hence. Also...her underwear.

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