He exuded potent masculinity from every pore, a dynamic tsunami sweeping away anything in its path as he bent his head toward hers.
That faint trace of fragrant avicennia gerinans rose from his sun-bronzed skin and she inhaled him, sighing, dizzy enough to plop into his lap like the white blossom of the--
“Black mangrove,” she murmured.
His eyes widened. Gray-green. Like sea foam.
38 comments:
I love your twist, not what I was excepting at all. My imagination turned to thick, sticky mud. Fantastic six. Thank you.
Oh, nice visual imagery calling on all of the senses. I like!
Lovely sensory engagement!
~Xakara
Dawn's Early Light 6SS
Lovely six, Taryn!
Very tantalizing! A great excerpt!
A sensual and lovely six.
Loved the sensory description!
Great description! You really know how to use the senses.
A very engaging six. Lovely Taryn!
Surfer Dude? And LOVE IT! You sure do know how to pull right into a scene, Taryn!!
Funny and sexy and just plain awesome!
Very nice! I want to know what happens next!
Wow, I can almost taste him! Nice six.
Wow, that was an awesome description!
Great imagery, very sensual six.
I like how you paced it out and dropped in the bit of dialogue.
So evocative. Love her comment, and his eyes - yum.
Really good, Taryn. Just love the imagery.
Nice and descriptive. Can really picture the scene in my mind.
You're great at pulling in all the senses!
Gorgeous, enveloping emotional pull.
Nicely done. Your use of imagery is excellent.
What is she doing thinking of plants! Nice job.
Love the plant imagery
Nicely done as usual, Taryn! Love it!
Lovely writing! Evoking memory with scent; you put me right in the moment.
Oh, downright poetic! Love the six!
Lovely, creative imagery.
Beautiful imagery. You create a clear picture so easily.
Ooo I love this - "That faint trace of fragrant avicennia gerinans rose from his sun-bronzed skin and she inhaled him, sighing, dizzy enough to plop into his lap like the white blossom of the--"
Love the sensuality in this snippet!
Like both the sensuous and sensual aspects of this six.
Great use of the sense of smell. And I heard a dramatic drum beat when he opened his eyes. Love the color of his eyes. Wonderful snippet.
It's nice to have sensory description other than sight and sound :) Awesome
Excellent descriptive & imagery!
Some beautiful sensory descriptions in there. made me want to inhale!
Great description. Love that she thinks out loud at the end. :-)
I could see what she did. Amazing imagery and a wonderful six!
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