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Six Sentence Sunday 9-11
“What do you think happened, Cole?” Lara asked, gesturing at the over-the-top honeymoon decorations dripping forlornly off the cabin’s redwood beams and rafters.
"Always one thing or another with Bree. She's never been the same since September 11."
Cole shrugged to ward off the black despair that shadowed the most hidden part of him and threatened to descend again, as it had for ten years, when he considered his sister’s inner demons -- more private and personal than his own.
"Eighteen, engaged to be married that June. We couldn’t get her to return to the living – not for a long time after.”
42 comments:
Damn! That six is full of emotion. That last line really pulls me in deeper.
Keep these snippets coming!
I am already too emotional today of all days, but I love your six. Thank you.
Very emotional. Close to tears
Very emotional, a difficult day for many.
A very sad and fitting six!
Yes, what they said.
*sniffle* Poignant and perfect for today.
A very delicately sad 6. I like that even though Cole obviously has his own issues, he understands the depth of his sister's pain.
Wow, that is an incredible six. Sad and solemn and perfect for today.
Great six for today. Remembering the lives loved and lost.
Thank you...
~Xakara
PsiCorps #3
Meaningful. Nice six.
Really powerful six. A bit choked up.
You really brought it home in a meaningful way
Taryn... here's another reader you brought to tears with that snippet! WOW "Eighteen, engaged to be married that June. We couldn’t get her to return to the living – not for a long time after.” How heart wrenching xx
Moving six and so appropriate for today. So sorry for them both. And beautifully written.
Powerful, moving and tasteful. Nice job!
What an appropriate post for today. Sad.
A powerful and fitting six.
'We couldn't get her to return to the living' -- powerful words and emotions. Thanks
Wow, great sample for today, it really built up an emotional lump in my throat. Nice work :)
Beautifully selected and written six. Thank you.
Touching ... moving. Powerful six.
What an appropriate six. Great post. :)
Beautiful. Thank you.
Wonderfully emotion filled!
loved it, so emotional, deep. amazing
What they all said.
Lest we forget
Very powerful six, especially for today.
Good six. Very emotional.
That's some rather intense emotion.
Beautifully done, Taryn.
Just stopping by to read your post. Very good. I'm a sucker for emotion.
Just wraps around your heart and squeezes.
Very touching and relevant. Great six.
Perfect for today. Beautiful, Taryn. Thank you.
:-( So sad. And relevant.
Very sad, but appropriate today.
So poignant and gripping, in just six lines.
Ooooh... very intriguing... will you continue next week?
SAD! Very emotional Six!
I enjoyed this. I feel like now I want to know how she finally came back to herself.
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