When I think of October, I think of Sleepy Hollow. When I think of Sleepy Hollow, I think of SLEEPY HOLLOW DREAMS, my erotic paranormal from The Wild Rose Press.
So instead of six sentences from Surfer Dude or Cole & Lara or other WIPs, I'm going to excerpt mini-bites from SLEEPY HOLLOW DREAMS over the next few weeks. Gonna try to keep the blog non-X-rated. Stay tuned to see if I'm up to that challenge.
As always, comments welcome.
(And, in the interest of full disclosure, the second sentence here is actually four sentences in the published book. Yeah. I cheated. So sue me.)
Enjoy!
The crisp October breeze tossed a branch against Katy Lyndhurst's half-open window.
Clatter... scratch... scratch... scratch.
A creak from the vicinity of the bedroom closet.
Bang.
The accompanying rotten-egg whiff of sulfur made her wrinkle her nose in sleep. More scratching against the windowsill.
40 comments:
Now that's what I call ominous. Are you thinking of writing a sequel?
Kinda spooky and yet I still want to read it! Nice six!
I love Halloween and creepy stories! Not so thrilled about rotten eggs and sulfur, though. Great six!
Great six, intrigued now to read more.
Nice creepy feel! :)
~Xakara
A Way To A Dragon's Heart 6SS
Spooky - and scary!
A very intriguing beginning to a fabulous story! :)
Fall is my favorite time of year! Love your snippet. Scratching at the window is always a sign of trouble...
Oooh, I hate those creepy branches! I had one of those that kept me away as a kid, lol.
Fun 6, Taryn. Looking forward to more.
This looks like an interesting book Taryn, great snippet!
Love this story - nice six
I love spooky stuff! This is a great snippet and I'm totally looking forward to the coming weeks!
Holy crap! Run girl, somethings coming!
Dun dun dun!!!! Great creep factor! :)
Uh-oh! Should she investigate the noise? I bet she will even if she shouldn't. Great six!
Perfect timing and Great set up for what's coming around the corner...love your six!
Great opening to set the stage for us, Taryn. I loved this book! Happy almost Halloween!
Creepy. Should she look down the hall? Or under the bed? Great six.
Well that was nice and creepy. Great six.
The smell of sulphur is always a bad sign. LOL. Creepy six. Great job.
Love Halloween! The last line with more scratching left me with chills. Nicely done.
Love the creepy vibe! Great six!
Wonderful creepy atmosphere! I love this time of year too (though there are Christmas decorations in the stores already!) Another excellent six
She's sleeping pretty hard, isn't she? lol. Get up!
Must be the Devil.... nicely done (we get thanksgiving before Halloween here)
Ominous six! nicely done!
Spooky!!!
Ooh! *goose bumps* Nicely written.
I think you should write another spooky sexy read. Same setting, really liked the setting.
Something scary's in there. Don't open the door!
Uh oh. Wonder who - or what - is there...
Ooo, spooky. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Great at setting the scene. Quite different from the parts I remember. Janet
Yay! I'm glad you're featuring this one!
Love your snippet....you drew me in with the Sleepy Hollow title. I love this time of year. Looking forward to reading your 6 next week :)
Great spooky six and I'm guessing with the sulphur smell a demon is on the loose.
I've got this one sitting on my e-reader! I must dig into it SOON! Great snippet!
Rotten-egg? Ugh! Now that's a powerful smell for a a crisp October day...
Excellent Six! Definite chills!
Nice atmosphere. :)
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