“What are you going to do to them, Aidon?”
Stephanie nods toward the pair of weeping dingbats.
Stephanie nods toward the pair of weeping dingbats.
Percy munches a flaky biscuit, the waterworks running all the while, unware that the more he eats, the more uncontrollable his tears. Theo slurps a delicate lemon-asparagus soup and tries to pull his seat closer to the table, unconscious of the chamois-covered manacles clamped around his calves, or that the only direction he's moving is down. The polished floor tile beneath the suitors’ chairs recesses again, lowering them another inch or so on their way to Tartarus.
“What do you want me to do, Steph?”
39 comments:
Great snippet!
Hehehehe. Well done - love it.
Fantastic six xx
Oh my! This Thanksgiving promises to be a wild ride for these two...great six!
Those boys are in trouble... I wonder what she'll decide. Great six! :)
weeping dingbats. Love it
Sounds like a terribly delicious meal!
Fantastic six! ;-)
Sounds yummy. Now I'm hungry!
Very intriguing six, Taryn! Can't wait to read more!
I LOVE This...fantastic!
That sounds a little underhanded. ;)
Oh well then. Great job!
Intriguing six, Taryn. :)
I have a feeling that's a trick question! Can't wait to see what comes next. Excellent excerpt as always, much enjoyed.
Well, that's a heck of a spot to put Steph in. Great 6, Taryn. :)
Sounds like he's got it all under control yup it's all good.
I'd like to see her response! :-)
Oooh, this is creepy and chilling! You shouldn't mess with the bloke! :)
Weeping dingbats. Too funny!
Uh oh. That can't be good. This is a cool twist on Surfer Dude's story I didn't see coming. :)
Ooh, I'm intrigued!
Just to clarify: This isn't Surfer Dude's story. It's his older brother Aidon's story!
Very original! Thanks for sharing. :)
Nice imagery. Very vivid. I loved it.
Very interesting!
Whoa, different. And "the pair of weeping dingbats" made me smile.
Oooh. I iz intrigued! More, I say!
Spiked with attitude, a little tart for the sweet imagery. Tippin' my hat!
Sounds about right considering the uninvited guests. Janet
I love your underworld setting. Amusing, too!
Foolish live dudes! lol.
Absolutely love this! I wonder what she'll respond with. :)
Uh-oh! I think the pair of dingbats are in for a wild ride!
Hmmm. They brought upon themselves, I'm sure, but I bet he'll be a hero in the end. Great six!
I have the idea that she better be careful what she answers. No telling what he'll do to the dingbats if he doesn't like her reply. :)
Ooh, interesting description and world!
Oh, creepy. Great six.
Gives a new meaning to southern hospitality :)
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