“You here tomorrow, Gidge?”
Mia raised an auburn eyebrow, the coppery brown of a worn penny-cronoson, a shade or two darker than the fiery mahogany of her hair.
“It’s an Old Earth term," he started to explain, but she squirmed out of his arms to click the computer keyboard.
“Gidget?” she squeaked. “Girl midget?”
“Well, you only come up to here on me, Shortcake,” he shrugged, and drew a line at his clavicle.
44 comments:
Loved it! Wouldn't expect to find a Gidget reference in an SFR, which gets the attention. The characters seem very appealing!
*snort* LOL Love it! As someone who is proudly 5ft 1 and 3/4 inches - I totally am offended. Or not. Just realistic in the fact that everyone towers over us "gidgets" LOL. Love your six hon.
LOL Great dialogue! Actually, I love the nicknames. :)
What story is this from?
Love the tease in the dialogue but he'd better be careful she doesn't smack him
Lol! I can feel her annoyance at being called Gidget, but damn if that wasn't funny...
Awesome dialogue!
Sounds like a foot in the mouth moment. But would he? Great six! Love how your characters are so distinctive. :)
Too funny! Love the reference. Maybe if she watches some of those old beach movies, she won't mind so much. :)
Hahaha. Surfer dude's a charmer, no? LOL
Oh, poor girl. I'm pretty sure she'll forgive him, though. Right?
Great six. He seems sweet and endearing!
Amy Durham
LOL! Calling her short is obviously the way to win her affection.
LOL! Great dialogue it pulls the personalities of the characters ;)
Hey Taryn! Love the six (and the photo)! It's great reading you, my friend! Hope you have a fantastic Sunday!
LOL great six xx
LOL Loved it fab 6
SLira aka BLMorticia
Very nice! Love the word Gidge.
Ha ha! :) Nice six, though now that Halloween is over I sort of miss the Sleepy Hollow Dreams excerpts. I've finally got it on my kindle though, so I'll be rekindling the Halloween spirit sometime soon!
Ha ha! Love the nickname. :)
This is such a fun snippet! Good old surfer dude ;-)
Love the playful tone. This story just makes me happy.
Love your word choices and descriptions, He sounds caring even while teasing.
Gidget, shortcake... hee! I have missed you so, Surfer Dude. Thanks for chiming in this morning. Look forward to seeing you again soon.
LOL! That's too funny!!
Too funny! This brought back memories of surfer dudes trying to teach me to surf at Huntington Beach back in the days of really long boards. I never got so I could stand up by myself. But looking back on it, that wasn't exactly a bad thing. lol Great six. And great hero.
ha! great banter... i love surfer-dude already!
Speaking as a Gidge, I'd bite his kneecaps off.
I'm thinking he better guard his dangly bits for a while after this one. LOL
She might only come up to "here" on him, but that means she's at the perfect height to get him "down there"! Fun six, Taryn. :)
hell, i'd probably come up to his well-muscled chest........
i'll be over here if you need me....
Very fun! Though how silly do I feel for never putting the girl midget connection with Gidget... *facepalm*
Playful exchange between them. I love it.
Wow haven't heard that term in a while - good for you to use it - fits perfectly and the pic is yummy
LOL Love the banter. I didn't know that's what "gidget" meant :-)
Too funny! Is that really what the name Gidget means? Great exchange between the two of them.
Really enjoy these sentences and Surfer Dude. Janet
This guy always sucks me in. And more Henri too? Tres hawt, lady!
LOL! Love it. :)
Very good. got me right away
Gidget, Shortstack, Surfer Dude... HA!!
Sexy and fun. Great six!
Fun!
Fun Six...your dialogue is smooth. I loved it :)
Gidget! ROFLMAO! Love it :) And yeay for Sufer Dude being back :)
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