Sunday, December 4, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday 12/4/11

             Cole leaned back against the deck railing, his arms crossed over his chest, his eyes smoldering as they took in the hot tub bubbles lapping her naked flesh.
            “Drink your fill, G-man.”   
            Their sexual tango, the seductive approach and avoidance of their intricate mating dance, wearied her.  “Or,” she mused, “we can go on playing this game.”
            She arched back against the ledge, resting her head and shutting her eyes. "Your ball, Brannigan."

                                                          
                                
                                              

27 comments:

E. P. Beaumont said...

They've studied at the Bogart and Bacall School of Smoldering Dialogue, it would appear. :) Nice six.

Brien Michaels said...

I love that you can feel the chemistry between these two. Great six!

Aimee Laine said...

OOoh, a game! there is only one acceptable 'win' in that one. ;)

Gem Sivad said...

Hot tub, hot hunk, games? Well yeah, come on Brannigan. Great scene in this snippet.

Jonna Rae said...

Wooohooo! Love the tango line. A hot tub and smoldering looks make it steamy.

Liz said...

Love her sassiness! Great 6.

Eleri Stone said...

Game on!

Sandra Sookoo said...

lol really liked her suggestive teasing.

relatedreality said...

All I can say is...WOW! Very seductive. Great six! :)

Cherie Marks said...

I think I know what his play will be. Great six!

Carrie Ann Ryan said...

Such a difficult choice! Sexy.

Ginger Simpson said...

Wow, what a great scene. Made me miss my hot tub. :)

Jenna said...

Well played! I hope he does a slam-dunk! Great tension in this scene. It smolders despite the hot tub. :) Excellent six.

Sadie Hart said...

Love this! Definitely want to see his next move.

Zee Monodee said...

Really well played to shoot the ball in his side of the court! What will he do now? :)

veronicascott said...

And wonder what will be next? Hmm, let me think - probably HOT. Great excerpt, as always, really enjoying this.

Xakara said...

Oh, the games we play! :)

~Xakara
A Way To A Dragon's Heart 6SS

Jessica Subject said...

I can feel the sexual tension and chemistry, hear the sizzle between the two of them. Great six! :)

Jessica K said...

Wow, I agree, incredible chemistry. What a great scene.

Stephanie Adkins said...

Great six, Taryn! I love the name Brannigan! Happy Sunday!

Jayel Kaye said...

Chemistry and tension. Great work

diannehartsock said...

I bet he'll be in that tub soon! That was a challenge and invitation. How can he resist?

Patricia Preston said...

Lotsa steam from that hot tub! And photo. LOL

lexcade said...

Phew. I would love for Cole to join me in a hot tub. Any time.

Love this six, Taryn. Not sure who I like more--Cole or Surfer Dude...

Krystal Wade said...

Please, JUMP IN! Great six!

Layna Pimentel said...

hehehe Love the sexual tension! Great six Taryn!!

Hailey Edwards said...

Very sexy six. I think if they keep playing cat and mouse, the fur is going to fly soon. ;)

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