Sunday, March 13, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday 3/13/11

Thought we'd go back to see how Cole and Lara were doing.

The beginning of the infamous hot tub scene from my romantic suspense WIP, Cole in Her Stocking:

As if her heated thoughts had conjured him, the glass doors slid open and Cole strolled onto the redwood deck, his masculine frame backlit by the lights from the cabin, a powerful presence in the night. Through the misting air, his gaze locked with hers, embers sparking until his wintry eyes blazed with sexual fire. 

 Curls of need shimmered across the surface of Lara’s skin, and she shivered, despite the warmth of the hot tub.

Silence lengthened between them and magnified each creak of the snow-laden fir trees surrounding the lodge. Cole leaned back against the railing, arms crossed over his chest, his eyes smoldering with hunger as they traveled over her. 

 “Drink your fill, G-man.”




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33 comments:

lexcade said...

Niiiice. I want mooooooore!

And I love how your sentences always come with delicious pictures ;)

Jessica Subject said...

Very sexy!

Gem Sivad said...

I want in the hot tub with him. Yummy.

gem

Fallon said...

Your writing is so fluid. I love how sensual this is.

Sandra Sookoo said...

mmm, yummy!

heatherthurmeier said...

Love it! Great snippet. I hope you give us more of this scene next week!

sassyspeaks said...

Hot tub Hot scene - very very nice !

graylinfox said...

Hot tub and a hot man. Sexy!

Patricia Preston said...

Great post. Love the pic.

Laura Kaye said...

Holy electric sexual tension. And I freaking love the title! Great play on words!

Liz said...

So vivid that I was in that hot tub. But I know it's not that kind of book - :))

Katrina W said...

G man !! love it !!! your sss are always a treat and I want more !!!!!! ;)

kat
kittee_cat@bigpond.com

Liia Ann White said...

Drink you fill G-Man - that's gold!
I love Cole and Lara :-)

Eleri Stone said...

I love when you do Cole and Lara snippets. More please!

Taryn Kincaid said...

Thanks, all.
Heather, not sure if you'll get more hot tub or not. More than the water gets hot in there.
Liz, what do you mean, "not that kind of book?" LOL!
Eleri -- Probably will get more Cole & Lara snippets. Torn between several WIPs right now but I need to finish them and push them out of the nest.

Vivien Jackson said...

That last line is wholly of the awesome.

Sarah Grimm said...

If more than the water gets hot, you MUST share! Love the last line!

~Sarah

Lucy Felthouse said...

Oooh, awesome six, Taryn! :)

Ella Drake said...

I think there's about to be a lot more steam!

Stacey Kennedy said...

Everything about that was awesome! The vivid description...Cole...just everything! YUM!!

Jay Di Meo said...

Very sensual! I love it.

laynap said...

Love, love, love the descriptions here. And that last line, awesome!

Fab six, Taryn!

Cara Bristol said...

Very sensual imagery. Nice.

Laurie A. Green said...

Love all her steamy thoughts and impressions re: Cole--and then her oh so chilly question.

And the title is genius. Luvit!

Hailey Edwards said...

Love the description here. You are one talented lady. ;)

Darcy Drake said...

The atmosphere you've created is intense! I love it.

Lisa Fox said...

I love this story and every single excerpt from it has been awesome.

Taryn Kincaid said...

Jeez, maybe I really should finish it then!

Lindsay said...

Sounds like either or both could melt the snow surrounding them. Great visualation.

Lauri J Owen said...

Great use of description. Loved these six.

Pippa Jay said...

Loved that 'curls of need' line! :)

Alyssa Fox said...

Very sexy!

Jayel Kaye said...

Girl, you are so wicked and I love it!

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