The beginning of the infamous hot tub scene from my romantic suspense WIP, Cole in Her Stocking:
As if her heated thoughts had conjured him, the glass doors slid open and Cole strolled onto the redwood deck, his masculine frame backlit by the lights from the cabin, a powerful presence in the night. Through the misting air, his gaze locked with hers, embers sparking until his wintry eyes blazed with sexual fire.
Curls of need shimmered across the surface of Lara’s skin, and she shivered, despite the warmth of the hot tub.
Silence lengthened between them and magnified each creak of the snow-laden fir trees surrounding the lodge. Cole leaned back against the railing, arms crossed over his chest, his eyes smoldering with hunger as they traveled over her.
“Drink your fill, G-man.”
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32 comments:
Niiiice. I want mooooooore!
And I love how your sentences always come with delicious pictures ;)
Very sexy!
I want in the hot tub with him. Yummy.
gem
Your writing is so fluid. I love how sensual this is.
mmm, yummy!
Love it! Great snippet. I hope you give us more of this scene next week!
Hot tub Hot scene - very very nice !
Hot tub and a hot man. Sexy!
Great post. Love the pic.
Holy electric sexual tension. And I freaking love the title! Great play on words!
So vivid that I was in that hot tub. But I know it's not that kind of book - :))
G man !! love it !!! your sss are always a treat and I want more !!!!!! ;)
kat
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Drink you fill G-Man - that's gold!
I love Cole and Lara :-)
I love when you do Cole and Lara snippets. More please!
Thanks, all.
Heather, not sure if you'll get more hot tub or not. More than the water gets hot in there.
Liz, what do you mean, "not that kind of book?" LOL!
Eleri -- Probably will get more Cole & Lara snippets. Torn between several WIPs right now but I need to finish them and push them out of the nest.
That last line is wholly of the awesome.
If more than the water gets hot, you MUST share! Love the last line!
~Sarah
Oooh, awesome six, Taryn! :)
I think there's about to be a lot more steam!
Everything about that was awesome! The vivid description...Cole...just everything! YUM!!
Very sensual! I love it.
Love, love, love the descriptions here. And that last line, awesome!
Fab six, Taryn!
Very sensual imagery. Nice.
Love all her steamy thoughts and impressions re: Cole--and then her oh so chilly question.
And the title is genius. Luvit!
Love the description here. You are one talented lady. ;)
The atmosphere you've created is intense! I love it.
I love this story and every single excerpt from it has been awesome.
Jeez, maybe I really should finish it then!
Sounds like either or both could melt the snow surrounding them. Great visualation.
Great use of description. Loved these six.
Loved that 'curls of need' line! :)
Girl, you are so wicked and I love it!
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