Sunday, March 20, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday 3/20/11

“What’ll it be, baby?”

Lara started. She’d finally muscled her way onto a bar stool, but she’d spent the last couple of minutes alternately scanning the establishment and its customers, or ogling the bartender’s hellacious butt -- the kind of taut, primo male ass that could give a woman wet dreams for a month.

Now he was in front of her, rag slung over his shoulder as he scooped a pile of cash from the counter, the timbre of his deep voice and the tone of that “baby” sending zippy buzzes of electricity up her spine -- and lower. Lara’s mouth went dry.


“One of those.”


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41 comments:

Kerrianne Coombes said...

Zippy buzzes eh? Nice! Xx Great 6!

Pippa Jay said...

Did 'one of those' refer to him? lol. :)

Jessica Subject said...

That's a fun excerpt! I want to squeeze that butt.

Katrina W said...

Only one of those !! Ill take both !!! cheeks that is lol !! great sss !!

Sandra Sookoo said...

lol one of those what? :-) Loved it!

sassyspeaks said...

good six !

Patricia Preston said...

The bartender sounds hot!

Liia Ann White said...

Ooh I'll have one of those too please :-D

Tara Stearns said...

Great six. One of those! LOL.

Dee Carney said...

Woot! Love it!

Cara Bristol said...

Wow! Love it!

Liz said...

I love this story!

Taryn Kincaid said...

Katrina W., I so appreciate you stopping by every week, even though you are not playing yourself!

Tara -- I couldn't find yours, but I commented on your critiquing post on your blog!

Thanks, as usual, everyone. Love, love, love all the comments.

Sarah Grimm said...

What a great six! Does one of those refer to the bartender?

Taryn Kincaid said...

Actually, sorry to disappoint, but...not yet. She's pointing to a black-and-tan. Cole's family (he's Cole Brannigan) owns a brewing company, along the lines of Guinness, but Lara doesn't know that yet. She doesn't know his name yet, or that he's an undercover FBI agent. She's just speechless and pointing at what someone at the other end of the bar is having -- a black and tan which, of course, Cole thinks is a "good choice." Made with Brannigan by a Brannigan. Lovingly and sensually.
I was going to do the black-and-tan scene in honor of St. Patrick's Day...but it was a little too long. Maybe eventually.

Gem Sivad said...

What ever...I felt the zippy buzzes up my spine--and lower too. ;)

Great sexy six!

gem

Marsha A. Moore said...

I can almost hear his voice! Great description.

Linda Morris, Romance writer said...

Nice six!

Eve Cassidy said...

hellacious butt... yummm

Hailey Edwards said...

Mmm nothing wrong with a little distraction. Ordering drinks is tough work. ;)

Chrystalla Thoma said...

His hellacious ass - love it!

Susanna Fraser said...

Mm, very descriptive!

JoAnne Kenrick said...

FAB six, Taryn... absolutely love the character work in this six. Hellacious butt, OMG YUM! hehe

And thanks for pointing out the 'pumping' thing on my six this week -- can't believe i didn't spot that mirror word in there. Shame on me! hehe And nice suggestions for replacement, too :) Thanks!

Taryn Kincaid said...

I'm beginning to think I'm a better editor than writer.

lexcade said...

Ditto on the butt. This is the kind of stuff I can't write without giggling like a 12 year old, but love to read ;)

Misa said...

Love this - so sexy! And I love the title. Punny :D

Cole sounds delicious. Can I have one of those? ;)

Taryn Kincaid said...

Sorry...he's mine (and eventually...he'll be Lara's!)

Lindsay said...

Good to see that some part of her is dry. Great six.

Christa Paige said...

Snappy, fun and sexy. Loving your six sunday post.

JL Walters said...

Good sentences. How is this progressing.

Taryn Kincaid said...

I've added some stuff in the chapters before the hot tub scene. Haven't moved past the wrestling over the flashdrive scene yet, but I've gotten sidetracked with something else!

Sooooo easily distracted. Oooh. Shiny.

Lauri J Owen said...

Very cute. Made me smile.

Laura Kaye said...

Mmm, this is delicious! Love that description of him!

Stacey Kennedy said...

"primo male ass" *drools* Awesome six!!

Marie Dees said...

Oh, yes, I'll take one of those too!

Shelly said...

That was a fun post!!!! And i'm with Marie, i'll take one of those too! :)

Eleri Stone said...

I want one of those too. I really like this story and want you to finish it so I can read the whole thing. Pleeeaaase.

laynap said...

the bartender’s hellacious butt -- the kind of taut, primo male ass that could give a woman wet dreams for a month. -OMG I love it!!!

Great six, Taryn!

Emily Cale said...

Great job, Taryn. I love the voice.

Lisa Fox said...

One of those please indeed!

Vivien Jackson said...

I want what she's having.

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