Lara started. She’d finally muscled her way onto a bar stool, but she’d spent the last couple of minutes alternately scanning the establishment and its customers, or ogling the bartender’s hellacious butt -- the kind of taut, primo male ass that could give a woman wet dreams for a month.
Now he was in front of her, rag slung over his shoulder as he scooped a pile of cash from the counter, the timbre of his deep voice and the tone of that “baby” sending zippy buzzes of electricity up her spine -- and lower. Lara’s mouth went dry.
“One of those.”
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41 comments:
Zippy buzzes eh? Nice! Xx Great 6!
Did 'one of those' refer to him? lol. :)
That's a fun excerpt! I want to squeeze that butt.
Only one of those !! Ill take both !!! cheeks that is lol !! great sss !!
lol one of those what? :-) Loved it!
good six !
The bartender sounds hot!
Ooh I'll have one of those too please :-D
Great six. One of those! LOL.
Woot! Love it!
Wow! Love it!
I love this story!
Katrina W., I so appreciate you stopping by every week, even though you are not playing yourself!
Tara -- I couldn't find yours, but I commented on your critiquing post on your blog!
Thanks, as usual, everyone. Love, love, love all the comments.
What a great six! Does one of those refer to the bartender?
Actually, sorry to disappoint, but...not yet. She's pointing to a black-and-tan. Cole's family (he's Cole Brannigan) owns a brewing company, along the lines of Guinness, but Lara doesn't know that yet. She doesn't know his name yet, or that he's an undercover FBI agent. She's just speechless and pointing at what someone at the other end of the bar is having -- a black and tan which, of course, Cole thinks is a "good choice." Made with Brannigan by a Brannigan. Lovingly and sensually.
I was going to do the black-and-tan scene in honor of St. Patrick's Day...but it was a little too long. Maybe eventually.
What ever...I felt the zippy buzzes up my spine--and lower too. ;)
Great sexy six!
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I can almost hear his voice! Great description.
Nice six!
hellacious butt... yummm
Mmm nothing wrong with a little distraction. Ordering drinks is tough work. ;)
His hellacious ass - love it!
Mm, very descriptive!
FAB six, Taryn... absolutely love the character work in this six. Hellacious butt, OMG YUM! hehe
And thanks for pointing out the 'pumping' thing on my six this week -- can't believe i didn't spot that mirror word in there. Shame on me! hehe And nice suggestions for replacement, too :) Thanks!
I'm beginning to think I'm a better editor than writer.
Ditto on the butt. This is the kind of stuff I can't write without giggling like a 12 year old, but love to read ;)
Love this - so sexy! And I love the title. Punny :D
Cole sounds delicious. Can I have one of those? ;)
Sorry...he's mine (and eventually...he'll be Lara's!)
Good to see that some part of her is dry. Great six.
Snappy, fun and sexy. Loving your six sunday post.
Good sentences. How is this progressing.
I've added some stuff in the chapters before the hot tub scene. Haven't moved past the wrestling over the flashdrive scene yet, but I've gotten sidetracked with something else!
Sooooo easily distracted. Oooh. Shiny.
Very cute. Made me smile.
Mmm, this is delicious! Love that description of him!
"primo male ass" *drools* Awesome six!!
Oh, yes, I'll take one of those too!
That was a fun post!!!! And i'm with Marie, i'll take one of those too! :)
I want one of those too. I really like this story and want you to finish it so I can read the whole thing. Pleeeaaase.
the bartender’s hellacious butt -- the kind of taut, primo male ass that could give a woman wet dreams for a month. -OMG I love it!!!
Great six, Taryn!
Great job, Taryn. I love the voice.
One of those please indeed!
I want what she's having.
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