Cole stared at the words “Property of the FBI” stenciled in peeling letters across Lara's chest and suddenly felt a twinge of… envy? He hated the idea of Lara as anyone’s “property.” Least of all the bureau’s. The flare of possessiveness made him uneasy and his scowl deepened. This was a new low in the annals of sexual depravity, he thought. Jealous of his own fucking sweatshirt.
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LMAO! Just imagine if she had a male partner! Love the guy's attitude and inner dialogue!
She's not the agent. He is. She's wearing his sweatshirt.
Great voice in your six, well done!
That is awesome! I love that the very words made him jealous and they don't even apply! Perfect :)
~Xakara
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Ha, brilliant last line. Fab snippet!
The whole snippet is great, especially the last line. And you gave us a pic of Jon Hamm! That's awesome all around!
Love the last line - and his inner thoughts.
You made me laugh out loud. Great six!
Great character insight/realization. Love this story!
Love this! I think he's got it bad for her. LOL
Jealous of his own sweatshirt! LOL
Love it!
LOL! I LOVE this story. And I think I am a little bit in love with Cole.
Love the inner thoughts. Cole sounds like a great character!
Love it! And the sudden jealousy of his own sweatshirt LOLOL
Great six!
Ha! The last line was great, as was the entire interior monologue.
I love that inner monologue! And his possessiveness!
Cole. **happy sigh**
green with envy? what colour would it be for a sweatshirt? great snippet
*snort* That is some funny sh*t! And a very clever way of giving us insight into this character. Brava!
wow, love a jealous man! Rare to see one jealous of a sweatshirt though. LOVE IT !!!
Taryn, That Last Line is Utterly Fantastic.
LOL! Wonderful six, funny and revealing of the character.
lol nice job!
Taryn, you've done it again. Great six and the last line is so funny
LOL! GREAT Six!
Poor guy. He's got it bad, doesn't he? Maybe she'll find a way to reassure him. :)
Fun six. The sweatshirt thing is a nice touch.
I love this! He's awesome.
Yum! I love a possessive man!
Oh, a great way to show his feelings!
Ha, loved this! Especially with the picture, that says it all.
What a great last line! I love this. Powerful six.
Yes, pretty bad to be jealous of his own tee shirt (not just any tee shirt, mind you.)! If she gives it back, will he ever wash it again? LOL. Loved this six.
LOLOL Love it. He's going to get one made with his name on it, right?
I wasn't expecting the end there. Loved this six.
Uh oh, I have a feeling I'm going to fall in love with another one of "Taryn's hero's"!
Cole sounds wonderful. I want one. Can I have a Cole too? I like that he's not jealous because he thinks she's HIS but because she belongs to herself. Great six, Taryn!
I literally LOL'd. Utterly great six.
This may just be my favorite six I've read today. Very nice!
*laughed* LOVED this!
Awesome six! I loved this.
What a great scene you set up. Enjoyed Cole's inner dialog.
LMAO oh god that's awesome!
LOL 'Jealous of his own fucking sweatshirt.' This is the only six that's actually made me laugh today. :D
I loved those last two lines! He's in so much trouble. Poor guy. LOL
Loved his internal dialogue!
Taryn... I immedidately thought she got a tat! Whew...glad to know it was a sweatshirt! lol
Great last line, changes the whole meaning! :-)
Barb
Nice! I can sense what he feels!
Ha! l like that six very much!
My favorite six of the week! Well done! ;)
LMAO! Too cute!
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