“Where exactly does it hurt?”
"Like a freakin' head vise," he said, massaging his temples and shrugging shoulders stiff with tension. Magnificent shoulders that filled out the black evening jacket like the steel and titanium span bridging Nuevos Mares to mainland New Mycenae.
“Take it off,” Mia instructed.
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Push his mood! (And btw, thanks for the eye candy. Yum!)
I agree with Dee! I may be drooling just a bit...
Another great snippet! Thank you.
Ooo, nice! :)
~Xakara
A Way To A Dragon's Heart 6SS
Mmm!l love a man in a black evening jacket!
A man in a black evening jacket is divine--a man with shoulders like that--doesn't need the extra layer. ;)
Love a man who dresses well. And then I got to the picture and the black evening jacket image was replaced by the rainy stud with a towel. Yum.
Awesome. Love the snippet. Love the pic.
I think he should take it off too!
Fantastic! and the pic!
Love the six - love them - and very appropriate for today!
Oh I really really love that last line. Great six.
'past nor'easter' lol. Great description.
Hee I don't blame her I want him to take it off too!!
xx
A.
Love the analogies to weather and nice eye candy. Great six!
woo hoo! take it off indeed. well done!
Liz
Yes. Take it off! Awesome six, Taryn, as always! How I love Surfer Dude :)
Love the six and mmmmm to the eye candy!
Wow, great description and a hot photo. Does it get better than that?
Ooh I like! I think he should take off a little more than his evening jacket though ;-)
Perfect for this weekend! As always, amazing descriptions.
That kind of turmoil seems appropriate this weekend, lol. Thanks for sharing!
If only Hurricane Irene were so nice.
A black evening jacket dresses up even the gungiest man (I know) and yep on the pic also - suggestive lovely
Oh yeah. Take it OFF, baby! ;)
Love the weather analogy. Nice storm building.
whooo hot stuff for a cool morn. Thnx!
gr8 SSS edition for such tumultuous happenings in the world.
nice.
Yes, take it all off!! :)
Great six, as always. And yummy eye candy! :)
I love the weather metaphors! Great six!
Take it all off, Surfer Dude. Make Mia REALLY flustered!!! Great six, Taryn!
You had me at "magnificent shoulders that filled out the black evening jacket." SO. YUM. (And yes, weather metaphors very appropriate today.)
I really love your description, very sexy and beautiful. This is great writing!
Surely a little nudge wouldn't hurt? Love the visuals in this piece. Great six!
Did you plan the weather metaphors or did it just work out that way? Fun six.
Thanks for the eye candy!
Great 6! Loved the reference to the nor'easter when talking about his mood! Sexy!
Whew! Hot six! And pic!
Love nor'easter; what a great simile for his temper.
Nice six. Love a man in a suit!
Very nice...wasn't sure if I should read the 6 sentences or stare at the yummy picture...
thanks :) both are great ☺
Lovely pic...lovely post... I like this man!
I'd want him to take off more than an evening jacket! Shoulders to die for! Thanks for the eye candy, too. :) Love this six.
Interesting six! And thank you so much for brightening my Sunday with that delightful piece of eye candy...yummy!
Take it off! Take it off! Great 6. Yummy pic, too. :)
Go easy with him! Wonder how long before he really sees her? :)
Wow, those sound like some impressive shoulders!
Hot pic, hot six!
Oooh, yum! And the pic was the cherry on top of the sundae! :)
Love the description of his eyes! And I want her to push his buttons! Let's see what he's got! LOL
I'm a little confused... she asks where it hurts, but he doesn't say where, he describes how much it hurts... and even though he's touching his head, she's asking him to take off his jacket? I think I missed something somewhere...
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