He rose to his full height and nearly took her breath away.
Leaping lobsters.
Well over six feet of prime, masculine real estate.
When he glanced down at her, her toes curled within the chunky fleece-lined boots she’d taken from Letisha’s locker.
She adjusted her eyeglasses with scholarly deliberation and then picked up a digitex plasma clipboard as if it were a shield.
"What seems to be the problem?" she asked.
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48 comments:
'..prime, masculine real estate.' I love it! Fantastic six. Thank you.
A great six. I love how your writing draws me in, and when i get to the end i am always dissapointed that there is no more to read. ...'He rose to full height and took her breath away.' A fab line
No problem at all, that I can see. Great lines. My fav is the leaping lobsters.
Humor, visual presentation and character development--all in six. Great snippet!
I love how you show her struggle and determination to maintain her composure. Great six!
Love using her clipboard as a shield. Wonderful snippet. Left me wanting more.
WOW! Not surprised her toes curled. More please!
Oh man... He sounds fantabulously toe-curling. Great six!
Great six. I love this story!
Oh, I'm all for Surfer Dude!
lol "leaping lobsters" Loved the snippet!
LOL! Very funny six! Love the 'leaping lobsters'. Thanks for sharing.
I like how she tries to demonstrate her professionalism - yeah right - hard to do with toes curling lol
Leaping lobsters indeed!
Leaping lobsters...lol! Love how your sense of humor comes through in this story.
LOL Love the humor. :)
Love! Beside loving futuristic, I love oceany themes. Great job with an intriguing six. Addind to my TBR pile now!
Thanks, Daisy. But I haven't actually finished it yet! LOL!
Oh, yum! Sexy six!
Love the real estate comment.
That's a LOT of attraction. She's going to need a bigger clipboard. :)
I'm totally into your six. Great work! I love the description of him as well.
What's the problem? No problem! Another humorous and accurate six.
LOL! Cute! Way to play it cool. ;)
Terrific characterization, world building, and humor. You always make me laugh.
This was LOL funny. I'm looking forward to many more problems for those two.
'six feet of prime, masculine real estate'
'digitex plasma clipboard as if it were a shield'
I can't figure out which one of these if my favorite here. Ah, to heck with it. Love'em both
Perfect touch of humor in this piece. I don't think her clipboard will save her from his hotness, though. ;)
Leaping lobsters is right if he's anything like the pic! Great humor in this six!
Yep I agree with the others, prime real estate is a classic line!
Very well done. This was a joy to read. My favorite Six so far.
"Surfer Dude". :) Ha! Cute!
yummy! That professional mask is in grave danger of slipping off...
tory moves ahead. The first sentence was a bit much but do like the rest and the direction of the story.
Great six and thx for the visit to Taboo
I love the humor beneath her reaction! Lovely!
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Great six. Yeah, my favorite line is the leaping lobsters as well. love it.
Terrific scene with lots of sizzle between them. I loved "leaping lobster" -- clever and original. Good job.
Very visual six - I love her reaction to him.
Love this. I can picture the whole scene in these few sentences. Great job
Great voice! Enjoyed!
What one thinks, and what one does, are two different things... and there's an interesting power struggle here, both interior and exterior.
I loved these six! What book are they from?
Great introduction to him, loved her reaction!
This story always makes me smile! I'm glad you posted your Six from it! :)
Love the humour - great six! :)
leaping lobsters-prime, masculine real estate. what great language
That leaping lobsters part made me laugh. I love your six!
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