“Listen, you big lug,” I murmur, gasping for air when his lips release mine. “You’ve brought me Below, turned my whole world upside down – and I haven’t done anything to you.”
“My world isn’t exactly spinning normally on its axis, Stef.”
"But I --" The Big Guy's stunning admission shakes me to the core. "Really?"
44 comments:
LOVED it. I already enjoy your characters in this snippet and I barely met them! Excellent excerpt!
Great six! Well done.
I want more! I'm always up for anything set in the underworld (assuming that's what the Below is). I can't wait to read more.
I love how their personalities come out in the dialogue! Great six! :)
Shades of Hades and Persephone? Loved the voice and the interaction between the two :)
Sounds like you have a great series building. Can't wait to read them all!
Love the name calling. Makes it very realistic. :) Great six, looking forward to next weeks.
I like the sudden realization. Sounds like an awesome tale! Sensational six, Taryn!
Perfect six! I love her surprise. :)
I love their interaction! I can't wait to read more about them!
Oh, love that admission and that it's shaken her. Nice job!
Love the dialogue between them. Great job!
Nice when the guy admits he's vulnerable. Great six!
Tee Hee.. Rock his world girl! Or in this case, make waves.
The dialog feels so natural. Good job.
I like this so much. And the characters are great. Keep at it
um, I'll take him! fabulous six
Oh, I love his revealing. If she doesn't want him, I'll take him.
Love her reaction. So curious about who they are and where they are. Want more!
Sweet six. :)
Ooh, definitely intrigued!
Plot bunny - cute - and sometimes they multiply like bunnies too :D
Intriguing!
Compelling. Makes me want to know more. Is he up for grabs? Count me in.
Aww. That was really cute. I love how she's stunned. :)
Lovely six and David Gandy! YUMMM
You know that I think this is a good story but the present tense still bothers me. Janet
This snippet makes me wish it was sixTEEN sentence Sunday! I want more!
hmmm, maybe she doesn't know him as well as she thought, what else doesn't she know?? Very nice six!!
Nice interaction between these two. Great 6, Taryn. :)
I like the relationship that's building here!
Oh yeah. I love this. Love HIM!
LOL! Love the double take!
Uh oh...love confessions! :-)
Oh, I LOVE guys who'll admit that they're affected by what's happening, too! Great six!
Wait....what? LOL, great six!
Oh yes, really! I loved this interchange, could feel the sparks flying. Sweet, romantic, intense, gorgeous. Hope I get to read more.
Loved her reaction! Perfect. I really enjoy your characters.
Oh, my goodness! Great characterization. Her reaction is so visual. Nice six.
lol at her reaction! :D
Perfect scene! Wonderful dialogue and plot movement.
Very enticing! Well done. :)
Ha! Loved it. (laughs)
LOL! I *love* her response!
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