Sunday, August 7, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday 8/7/11

Taking a break from Surfer Dude and Mia this week for a little more Cole.

        Cole stared at the words “Property of the FBI” stenciled in peeling letters across Lara's chest and suddenly felt a twinge of… envy? He hated the idea of Lara as anyone’s “property.” Least of all the bureau’s.  The flare of possessiveness made him uneasy and his scowl deepened. This was a new low in the annals of sexual depravity, he thought. Jealous of his own fucking sweatshirt. 

                   
                                         
                                                                                                          

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52 comments:

Carrie Ann Ryan said...

LMAO! Just imagine if she had a male partner! Love the guy's attitude and inner dialogue!

Taryn Kincaid said...

She's not the agent. He is. She's wearing his sweatshirt.

Alix said...

Great voice in your six, well done!

xakara said...

That is awesome! I love that the very words made him jealous and they don't even apply! Perfect :)

~Xakara
A Way To A Dragon's Heart 6SS

gayleramage said...

Ha, brilliant last line. Fab snippet!

Sonya Clark said...

The whole snippet is great, especially the last line. And you gave us a pic of Jon Hamm! That's awesome all around!

Paula Martin said...

Love the last line - and his inner thoughts.

Gem Sivad said...

You made me laugh out loud. Great six!

Liz said...

Great character insight/realization. Love this story!

Jessica Subject said...

Love this! I think he's got it bad for her. LOL

Liia Ann White said...

Jealous of his own sweatshirt! LOL
Love it!

Lisa Fox said...

LOL! I LOVE this story. And I think I am a little bit in love with Cole.

lizculver said...

Love the inner thoughts. Cole sounds like a great character!

laynap said...

Love it! And the sudden jealousy of his own sweatshirt LOLOL

Great six!

Cate Masters said...

Ha! The last line was great, as was the entire interior monologue.

Laura Kaye said...

I love that inner monologue! And his possessiveness!

Eleri Stone said...

Cole. **happy sigh**

sue said...

green with envy? what colour would it be for a sweatshirt? great snippet

Monica Enderle Pierce said...

*snort* That is some funny sh*t! And a very clever way of giving us insight into this character. Brava!

KaceyHammell said...

wow, love a jealous man! Rare to see one jealous of a sweatshirt though. LOVE IT !!!

Rebecca Royce said...

Taryn, That Last Line is Utterly Fantastic.

Jessica K said...

LOL! Wonderful six, funny and revealing of the character.

Sandra Sookoo said...

lol nice job!

murdersandmysteries said...

Taryn, you've done it again. Great six and the last line is so funny

Kathleen Grieve said...

LOL! GREAT Six!

diannehartsock said...

Poor guy. He's got it bad, doesn't he? Maybe she'll find a way to reassure him. :)

Cara Bristol said...

Fun six. The sweatshirt thing is a nice touch.

Lex Valentine said...

I love this! He's awesome.

Bree said...

Yum! I love a possessive man!

Marie Dees said...

Oh, a great way to show his feelings!

Vivien Dean said...

Ha, loved this! Especially with the picture, that says it all.

Sondra said...

What a great last line! I love this. Powerful six.

Jenna said...

Yes, pretty bad to be jealous of his own tee shirt (not just any tee shirt, mind you.)! If she gives it back, will he ever wash it again? LOL. Loved this six.

Graylin Fox said...

LOLOL Love it. He's going to get one made with his name on it, right?

Bonni Sansom said...

I wasn't expecting the end there. Loved this six.

Stacey said...

Uh oh, I have a feeling I'm going to fall in love with another one of "Taryn's hero's"!

lexcade said...

Cole sounds wonderful. I want one. Can I have a Cole too? I like that he's not jealous because he thinks she's HIS but because she belongs to herself. Great six, Taryn!

Lauri J Owen said...

I literally LOL'd. Utterly great six.

Brien Michaels said...

This may just be my favorite six I've read today. Very nice!

Layla Hunter said...

*laughed* LOVED this!

Piper said...

Awesome six! I loved this.

Verna Clay said...

What a great scene you set up. Enjoyed Cole's inner dialog.

mirriamsmyth said...

LMAO oh god that's awesome!

Ranae Rose said...

LOL 'Jealous of his own fucking sweatshirt.' This is the only six that's actually made me laugh today. :D

Hailey Edwards said...

I loved those last two lines! He's in so much trouble. Poor guy. LOL

Pippa Jay said...

Loved his internal dialogue!

Jayel Kaye said...

Taryn... I immedidately thought she got a tat! Whew...glad to know it was a sweatshirt! lol

creativebarbwire said...

Great last line, changes the whole meaning! :-)
Barb

For Your Eyes Only~Author Lani Rhea said...

Nice! I can sense what he feels!

Gemma Parkes said...

Ha! l like that six very much!

Nichelle Gregory said...

My favorite six of the week! Well done! ;)

Dee Carney said...

LMAO! Too cute!

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